Here you can find some of Class 5’s entries to the BBC’s 500 Word Story Competition by looking in the comments section.
The Blog of Cathedral Primary School's Class 5
Here you can find some of Class 5’s entries to the BBC’s 500 Word Story Competition by looking in the comments section.
The Hotel
The foster girl’s ginger hair blew in the wind as she got an invitation from an unknown person. They were unidentified. Her foster parents told her she was meeting someone special and that they knew you would be happy. But she didn’t know who. It was a hard time for her as her dad is on the other side of the country, but she always kept a trinket box which kept photos of her dad and mum. The girl always thought her parents would come back for her, but she never did. The girl has been in care for five years and she is now twelve. She was told that she had to meet someone but she didn’t know who. As she got ready to leave her temporary home, she could see her vain showing through. Her heart was racing as her blood circulated.
On September 3rd 1945, her dad had just finished fighting for his life and the girl was terrified that she may never see her dad again. At that moment, she was clueless. She didn’t know how to cope with this problem. It was now 1947, and she had been in care for 8 years and she is now only 12. When she first set her eyes on the rundown building, she couldn’t let go of her mother, Clarissa, and this was a major problem…
Her clothes were always the same, jeans and a t – shirt, but she decided to dress up for the day as she wanted to make a good impression on her surprise, mystery guest. Now she was trembling.
She entered the disserted streets and started to sweat in her wedding clothes with fear. The foster girl lives very close to the tube of love in Paris. She found out that she was meeting this ‘someone’ at her favourite hotel called Madame Rose’s Hotel. As she glimpsed side to side, she could see her favourite landmark, The Eiffel Tower. She wished that one day; she would travel to the top. Her mum always went there with her dad and she always had to stay home.
She always had a smile on her face because she didn’t want upset anyone. The girl had to face seeing pictures of her dad from the woeful World War 2. She started welling up with tears but she thought ‘Hopefully, I will be fine for my guest at the hotel!’
As the girl got closer and closer, she found her name faintly printed in fancy writing on a board, saying that she was to go to the thirteenth floor to meet the person. The atmosphere got dark. Who was she meeting? Would they kidnap her? What would happen after this? Nobody knows.
The trail of roses started to disappear. She entered the St. John’s ballroom. She heard footsteps, heavy footsteps. It was the moment of truth. As the footsteps grew, A cobbled, rusty hand reached out to touch her and the light got dimmer and dimmer until, he took a breath and without hesitation, truth around to see her… Dad, Terry.
Can a picture be this inspiring?
The Magic Key
By Thomas
It was a run of the mill night at Buckingham Palace five armed security guards standing round her Queen size bed with dignity as they were guarding England’s most important person. However this was not enough for the youngest and most courageous guard called Thomas. He was always the one being bossed around by his domineering boss Daniel. But suddenly the Queen woke up by a beam of which looked like sunlight. She looked at her clock and thought ’golly gosh why is it so bright at this time. It is as dark as the darkest night. He was ordered by her majesty to go and see what it was.
As he was walking through the corridors he thought that they were everlasting, he trundled down the spiral staircases. Working for the Queen would be an honour to work for her it was like a barrier he could not pass, he wanted to find it interesting, but he just could not. Out of the corner of his eye he saw a key under the colossal food cupboard. Thomas reached out and picked it up, before his eyes he saw a magic door, then he put it down again and it was gone. This was a peculiar case was he falling for a trap. He called Jordan we could sell this online and make a fortune; the Queen was intrigued to see where he was going. Out of the corner of his eye he saw the Queens head poking out from behind the wall. “Or we could be peasants”
“No you will not, in Henry VIII he lost a key to the past” the Queen exclaimed. She picked up the key and before her eyes were the biggest and grandest doors she had seen. They unlocked the door; they saw a very plump man sitting on a spacious throne. It was a beautiful place with pictures of old Kings and Queens, beautiful red carpets, a lovely moat on the outside although there was a terrible smell.
Outside they saw the biggest and the most prodigious garden they had ever seen, this was often true for Thomas and Jordan as everyday they had to clean up there tiny little back gardens they were not permitted to enter her majesty’s gardens. This was very rarely the case for the Queen as she thought her garden was the biggest and the best. As she was walking through the long and high hallways, she felt intimated. She pushed open the big red door and she saw the biggest man she had ever seen, she found it so absurd that she could not keep her thoughts in. She burst out with hilarity. Henry VIII screamed vociferously” off with the head.” Thomas woke up in trepidation and opened his eyes as quickly as they would move. Thomas sighed and exclaimed” dreams these days, ‘eh.”
The Lost Princess
In a glittery Sea Castle, there lived a Prince, Princess and one of the Princess’ brothers. One haunted day, the Princess was abducted by a mischievous villain named Bane. When the Prince heard this news, he got his father’s sword and rode off to find the love of his life. He rode for days and days but he still couldn’t find her. The Princess’ brother thought this took too long so he set off to find his sister. Meanwhile, the Prince was bored so he turned around and started walking home, then his brother in-law saw him then he jump on his sea horse.
They searched for days and hours, probably even years. But Bane was always one step ahead, by setting traps under the sea. But the main trap was the Aero-Shark. It was Bane’s favourite pet. Whenever all the traps fail, he sending the Aero-Shark. The people who have faced the Aero-Shark, they’ve never returned back to the kingdom. They finally made to the murky dungeon full of souls taken from people or even their corpse. They didn’t want to enter but they did for the Princess’ sake. Bane finally showed up and exclaimed, “Look like you’ve showed up to the party, just in time to see the Aero-Shark eat the Princess.”
The Prince replied, “ You dare touch the Princess and you’ll see what I’ll do to you.”
Bane asked, “ Do what?
The Prince was so irritated he was like a lion eating his prey dreadfully. The Prince jumped straight at bane and gave him a nauseating scar on his eye. Bane yelled at the Prince saying, “ Curse you Prince, I’ll show you what real power is!” Then Bane renovated into a massive cheetah with fierce fangs and a conspicuous tail. Instantly the cruel cheetah striked his ferocious tail at the Prince! Without hesitation, the Prince moved out of the way quickly as a flash. Suddenly the prince slashed the cheetah at the chest(the weak spot) but Bane(the cheetah) still carried on. Bane asked, “So where’s your true power, huh?” The Prince replied, “It’s in my body.” And then he unlocked his true power and he became a dragon. The Princess whispered, “My Dear Prince, defeat him.” The Prince came at him as a courageous wolf but he was really fierce but as well as being fierce he was also scared because he didn’t know if he can control the power that is inside of him. But then he striked at Bane with his sharp claws like a lion then Bane flew like an eagle. The Princess launched out of the trap and hugged the prince so much that he couldn’t even breathe! But the devil was still alive. The Princess could sensor him but she won’t let the love of her life fall into his hands. The Prince, Princess and the brother in-law returned to the sea castle but there were more traps but they defeated them and they lived together.
The girl who found a key
One completely normal day Lily’s mother called Lily downstairs to show Lily her grandma’s toy chest her mum said it is Lily’s now she took it upstairs to her room Lily opened the chest and inside was a mysterious, glowing looking key she stared at it for ages then she picked it up and was teleported to a space ship it was as white as the moon and the glass was as clear as a diamond and it smelt like a gas station then she turned around and then a mysterious hippo appeared Lily thought it was a lovely hippo it got the key of Lily and as it turned out it was an evil hippo he said the key was his Lily said it was hers then the evil hippo suggested to have a fight Lily said in a confident way ”bring it on” the evil hippo already knew what he was doing because he has magical dance moves but lily just used normal karate moves but soon Lily had no more moves her mind went blank she lost. But since she wanted the key so much she asked for a rematch Lily had some bubble gum in her pocket so she started to throw bubble gum at the evil hippo and then she found out throwing bubble gum at the evil hippo made him weaker so then after throwing a lot of bubble gum at the evil hippo he lost his powers so they both now used karate because Lily ran out of bubble gum the hippo was getting tired so was Lily the hippo stopped which that meant Lily WON !!!! the hippo begged Lily to stop and she listened she told him “If you give me the key you will be safe” he gave the key back and they were both friends she held the key and she was teleported home safe and sound.
The End
Can’t dreams be so thrilling an adventourous?
Mad House
It was a dark and gloomy night.
Sammi was fast asleep, tucked up in his warm and cosy bed. But suddenly his rhythmic breathing was interrupted by a massive explosive bang! His body jolted itself into alert mode, rousing him from his deep sleep.
BANG! “Did I hear a bang?” His half-asleep brain inquired. BOOM! Another explosion. “What was that?”
The adrenalin was rushing through his veins.
He was so tense that he could hardly move.
He lay there for a while, until his thoughts could make sense of the situation.
BANG, was followed by an eerie flash of light that lingered longer than the lightning from a storm. Throwing off the bed covers, he ran towards the window. He paused for a moment before he timidly parted the curtains.
A strange glow was surrounding the old Professor’s house.
What was going on here? Something very unusual was occurring and Sammi intended to find out.
He crept down the stairs trying not to wake his parents, which was unlikely as they wore earplugs.
His heart was pounding and his legs felt so heavy he could hardly lift them but Sammi was too curious to let that stop him.
Somehow he found himself with the door handle within his grasp and just as he had found the courage to venture forward….BANG! BANG!………BOOM! This was followed by a high-pitched sound that made the door vibrate and it appeared to be wobbling.
“ Err…….this is weird.” He thought.
Eventually, the wobbling stopped and Sammi ran into the garden.
His parents had always said to keep away from the Mad Professor and Sammi had always wondered why.
As he approached the house there was already a small crowd gathering.
“Sir, if you don’t do something to reduce the noise levels, I am afraid I will have to remove your equipment.” Said the man from the council.
“You don’t understand. This is a day for celebration. I have finally discovered time travel. We shouldn’t concern ourselves with noise.” The professor was holding up what appeared to be a miniature pyramid, no bigger that a 10p piece.
“Do you think he needs to see a doctor? The poor old man seems a bit confused.” Sammi overheard two policemen discussing.
“No fire here lads.” Shouted the captain of the Fire Brigade.
Whilst everyone was distracted, Sammi moved closer to the Professor.
“Look young man, this is your future, this is time travel.” The Professor proudly unfurled his fingers to show off his invention. At this point the policeman moved forward.
“Come along you, there’s nothing to see here. Off you go home.” Said the policeman in a stern voice.
“ Ha, ha, yes, yes, quite right, off you go now.” The professor gave Sammi a mischievous wink and a friendly slap on the shoulder.
“Come on, off you go now.” The policeman continued.
Reluctantly, Sammi started his walk home. He was nearly half way back when he saw something glowing in his Pyjama pocket. ………………………To be continued!
Roses Of Love
The celestial sun was blazing, beating down on the road below. It was a typical Paris day. The boy with the blue eyes gazed out of the window looking for some purpose in life. He had a bad curse. That meant that he could not love (it was agony) if he loved something it transformed into a dead rose, he could not let any girl suffer like that. He saw a girl; she had caramel coloured skin and red hair, she glided across the road her hair a wave of dragon fire sent from heaven. ‘So gorgeous.’ He thought. At that moment his heart melted like rich chocolate on the boil. Could she be the one and only girl for him? Her long hair cascaded down her shoulders.
He ran to the bay window keeping his eyes on the perfectly tanned girl with the long fiery red hair, no he could not control himself and she looked so good. Too good to be true, but it was. But he knew the love would only end in tragedy. For five days he just stood and everyday at the same time he watched her walking down the road. Everyday she went through the great Rose maze.
He yearned for a taste of her ruby red lips- oh her lips how they glistened in the sun; they were oh so perfect in the sunlight. Her clothes were only the best. They were also the best you could get, and the colour code was chose to go with her shade of lip-gloss, which was winter spice red with a hint of blueberry. It was very, very luscious.
Finally after two whole weeks, he had made up his mind. He would have to follow her through the maze; he would take the risk, he not mind what happened to him or her (that was a lie, a big lie he cared for her). The next day he pulled himself together and walked down the road into the Great Rose Maze occasionally stopping to admire the beautiful roses twirling and twisting, racing each other to the center of the Great Rose Maze. He began to think why should I bother going to her if she would only become a withering, old, dead rose.
It seemed that all of his confidence had melted away along with his chocolate from the desert from yesterday night. That night the stars shone brightly over The Great Rose Maze leading the drawing the lovers closer-it was their destiny. The boy crept a little closer as if she sensed his presence she slowly turned around. She reached out a hand to touch him. He backed away but she was too quick for him! In an instant all of the flowers blossomed and the curse was finally lifted. “Thanks he gushed. By the way my name is Cameron and I know the might sound weird but I love you.” He liked how it sounded I love you. Who will you say it to?
Dinosaur war!
1753
Many years ago, there was a king this was no ordinary king he was a courageous king. Guarding him were his gallant knights. Years back dinosaurs ruled the land then when King Hugo and his men came they attacked the dinosaurs so did his fearsome Troll! Then the ‘dino intruders’ were gone and the castle was safe so was King Hugo. But will they come back for their revenge? Years later the troll was eating dinner with King Hugo and STOMP…STOMP…STOMP…
Was it the dinosaurs, did they come back for their revenge? “Incoming, incoming” shouted one of the soldiers. The Sargent came running to the solider. “What is it? “He asked.
“Dinosaurs there coming back, at least 100 of them! “He shouted
“Ok battle stations!” shouted the commander. So as the brave nights got there fire balls, catapults and fire bows. Meanwhile the troll was looking after the King. Down, down, down went all the dinosaurs and soon later half of them were dead. Suddenly the King of the dinosaurs called them back and King Hugo was safe so were his brave and gallant knights. Only for one thing the troll but a knight called George was calming him down and then George and the troll became the greatest of friends.
Then as other wars came they worked together as a team, well they did work with the other soldiers. But they were best friends and guess what they invented guns and the technology we use today in our wars.
2034 (ww3)
Bang, bang, bang. World War 3 has stared and it is here in England and it is absolutely terrifying. But thanks to that knight George and his best troll friend, we are all safe with these new gun and grenades and much more fabulous things! “ now lets get this war over and done with! Yarrrr!”
Year and years on somebody might become this person and invent more fabulous things. Will you do that? Maybe, maybe-not.
Thank you for playing Medieval times to our time. If you play this again you will receive a iPad 21 and fifa 34.
Years later his game was shared all over the world and people invent more and more things. Half the people in the world are inventor as for these to friends/brothers. Will you invent a gun, grenade, tank or etc.?
Castle 1763
The king is resting waiting for the next war and the next invention as he wants to use his new pistol and grenade. Also he wants to make his own one and use it, and he did he made the biggest invention ever a nukeula bomb. In 1569 the dinosaur king came to have a war he had taken some of his dinosaur soldiers, his best ones after a minute they were all dead with the pistol, grenades and… Nukeula Bomb it killed most of dinosaurs. So that means the king saved the soldiers. So the king really is courageous.
THE OLD WAR
The cheers still ring in my ears. I was leaving my good old country America! You see I was a soldier in the 2nd world war. I was fighting in D-Day, 1944. Before I knew it I was in a U-boat vomiting a lot ! I was scared like a dead man walking. I still believed in myself. We were going to Win This War! We arrived in Normandy I sprinted like a mad man not noticing the blood on my boot
. The first German to oppose me was already dead. Before I knew it I had ran out of ammo. I carried on fighting with a bayonet. Finally I found a bag of bullets for my rifle. I finally was backed up by one tank; a funny .I felt royal having a tank following ME! I arrived at the Atlantic wall (the wall that the Germans built to stop the English, the Americans…) from arriving in France. I ran but ping clack I was down some soldier had shot my leg but it only hit the side I could carry on fighting even though the blood trickled down my leg. The pain moved up my thigh.
Soon I was crawling on the sandy shore crying with pain, pleading God for his mercy. Soon an American medic came, he saved my life. We finally arrived to a squad who told us that we had won, but we still had to move into France. After a while I got better I managed to shoot again. I was ready for war. I finally arrived at the battle field were we won. I was delighted. Every couple of weeks I wrote to my family. My little girl Gwen, my wife Josette. I definitely missed them. We received a letter telling us to find a soldier called Duncan; the ink was smudged so we did not know why we needed to find him. Soon I became mates with a soldier called Morrell. One day my squad was walking on a field when a tank arrived, one problem it was German!! It aimed, just then it shot. God was on our side, it went over our head and exploded a tank behind us, something was strange, the tank behind us was a German Tank. The lid opened to reveal an American soldier. What luck!
We were run as a German jeep followed. Out of nowhere a bombed town stood before us, in all its well not-glory. We ventured into the town attentively an American came towards us” My name is Duncan. At last we found Duncan. Duncan explained how he had listened to a radio transmission and how Germans were going to kill him so he needed help we set sticky bombs and we position to shoot them.
The dreaded day arrived, the 12th of August 1944. I had first kill, Morrell shot well too, but that day he died a tank shot his tower, he could never had survive.
Ninja go masters of spinjiustes
webbounds one the sword of the fire master two the nucchucks –goes for the master of lighting three the blades for the ice master fourth blades of earth for the earth master.
Secondly a Samaria came to boy shop which was a weapons shop and the Samaria name was Wu the boy name was Kia he makes swords he uses a hammer to hit it and it turns hot because it is metal then pit it in water but then it did ‘ it but he failed.
So Wu goes to the shop then speaks to kai
the speaks Wu and speaks to him in a different language so Wu was out but then a mysterious dark sky and a army filled died skeleton army with Wu brother lord Garmadon the lord of underground Kai gets his sword he told his sister Nya stay back when the tell them how is boss then fights the army but then one comes with four swords because he has four arms then Wu shows him his spinjitsu by speaking ninga go! And the 2 lead of the skeleton army said your spinJitus is good.
Thirdly the skeleton troughs his sword. To a giant can of water then Wu uses his spinjitus to save kia . Also lord Garmadon takes Nya kia was not happy but then he playen !it on Wu why did ‘nt uses your spin thing it called spinjitus
This the end of spinjiust masters fire,
lighting
,ice,
and finally
But Kia was to be the master of fire the fire burns in side of you I will train you to became a ninja now let take you somewhere but they had to walk 1000 steps but finally they were there.
Thirdly Kia was expecting to see more but then Wu then a train set to became a ninja so he had a wooden sword.
Also he had to complete the in tell I finish my tea now start! But failed he tried in till morning but finally he got it.
So Wu said get some rest so kia his when ninjas then they take it out side fight. Ninga
Then Wu say infer then the boy were stopped and kai was shock and they
AL others there names Cole jay Zane and Wu spinjitsu
on they there ninja clothes kai the of fire burns in side of you jay the master of lighting goes through your blood Zane the master of ice the ice is the key and Cole the master of earth the rock is the key the ground . You will all find your spinjitsu now t we find first golden wabbines the the blade earth master. So they wake up to get read in there ship so Wu show them spinjitsu so he demonstration we are there we just if to get the map from the skeleton army gus it the kai and they they battle a mysterious dragon but they .
Flush
He woke up with a desperate feeling inside him, while the house is dark and empty. At first, he had no idea what this feeling was but after he took a moment to think for a while, he noticed that it was the need to use the toilet. He was bursting! So he jumped out of bed and sprinted to the toilet. Only, there was one problem;
He’s scared to flush in the night. It was hopeless. What was the point of using the toilet if he’s scared to flush it anyway? Millions of nasty thoughts flooded his mind like a… ooh a burglar hearing the toilet flush then he bursts in to do his terrible deeds. Maybe even a kidnapper jumps in and kidnaps him at the sound of the flush! But still, he needs to use it so… here goes!
The desperate boy burst into the toilet, only to repeat a series of, “Ahhhhh!”. By now, he had completely forgotten about his fear of flushing. He grasped the ramshackle chain and tugged at it with all his might and the noise of a flushing toilet echoed through the whole moonlit estate! What had he done? The poor child held his hands on his rapidly beating chest, paralysed with fear and hoping for the worst not to come. The next thing he new, he was being swept off his feet as the front door burst open. What was he supposed to do? At last, after a lot of twisting and turning, he managed to somehow wriggle his way out of two muscular, hairy arms and ran to his bedroom, slammed the door shut and prayed for nothing else to happen. But was it over yet…?
BANG BANG BANG! The door started to shake like you would if you saw a giant rattle snake. BANG BANG BANG, the door went again. Luckily for him, the door was securely locked. Beads of sweat was dripping down his head like mad and he had nowhere to hide, (just for in case)! Then suddenly, the banging stopped.
“Tom!” a rather sweet voice called out. This, calmed the boy now. It was a sweet voice of somebody who knew his name. What could possibly go wrong now?
“Tom, wake up, you need to go to school.” the voice continued. Tom now recognised this voice! It was the voice of his sweet mother. At that moment, Tom jumped up at least 1 metre in the air. He ran to the door and unlocked it. He then started his normal morning routine just like normal.
That was a nightmare for him. No… seriously, it actually was!!
The Lily Pad
What’s it like to be different? Well I could tell you that, but sometimes I really do wonder. The sun is shining above me and there is a beautiful day to spend. To be honest I can’t stay here in this cold pond all day! So its time to make a change, do something different for once. Really all I wish is to blossom. Every one needs to follow their dreams and mine is to adventure. Although I’ve always thought dreams are for the future and I never thought about going on a normal day like today! I could go to America for the day, or even France! What dreams await me? What will I see on my adventures?
So I’m off, to a new land, a new mind even. All I can see is the blooming trees around me and the growing grass brushing against my face. I wish I could blossom. Anyhow, the cooling water is splashing me and the sun is guiding my way. And then, out of the corner of my eye I saw the most beautiful lay before me. A tall green figure standing right there, looking down onto me. The statue of Liberty, I feel as free as the sawing birds above me. The bubbling feeling of fizzy drink gives me the dream of drifting onwards and away into the sun afore of me.
The sun is going down and adventures lay before me, lets go. There are new things to see. Do my dreams lie ahead? As I floated onwards I saw the most beautiful thing to see. A land of love and care with a dazzling display of fantastical fireworks covering the sight of the one and only Eifel Tower! As I continued to venture through the town the wonderful smell of roses and lilies sank through me. There were none around me though. What type of crazy magic is this, and where could it be coming from?
I know that I’m a lily pad and all but…
Wait a minute, I must have blossomed! What an adventure this has been. I’ve been all the way to America, and around the world to France! Where to next? And to think that I have blossomed on my journey! What a dream come true but not only a dream a wish as well.
To be honest, I should go home. So I guess I will continue my journey but into the moons light. The moon can be beautiful in so many different ways, like the statue of liberty and the Eifel Tower. Another adventure but the same journey. The next spring of wind that pushes me on will be my new life and a new start. The moon shies before me and I am desperate for a new start. As they say what goes up, must come down so sooner or later the sun will rise again.
What new dreams lay ahead of me and where will they take me next?
The Detective Who Lost His Memory
By Francisco
Every single key. What do they mean? And why are they even here? Every fake key will drain my memory. So why do I even care to search for the real key? But that key will restore my memory so… I won’t fail my mission! I will complete my mission so now things are getting serious. But my breathing, why is it so substantial. But I shouldn’t care. What’s this. Is this a vision. Who is that man? Wait! He has the key I seek. So now. Give me that key!
Wait a key is glowing. This is the key I seek. Now restore my memory loss! Huh. My memory it’s… it’s… not back. Darn it. So which key is which. But there is only one real key and I will find it. Hey. Another key is glowing. Should I trust it. The last one failed me. But it’s good to get a second chance. Now. Come to meeeeeee! Wait. It hasn’t came back. I will never trust another glowing key ever again. The man he’s came back, but not from my vison he has came in real life! Please restore my memory. Just let me have the key you will. Have you given me back my memory. Oh wait… you haven’t. Wait it is restored! Finally my life long dream is completed! My passion is like a lion pouncing on his prey. Oh wait it hasn’t came back. But my passion is a lion pouncing on his prey. I will never give up, even if it costs my life!
These keys. They feel obscure for some reason. They feel like souls that were taken from people or even their corpse. Wait why is that door there? I probably use the keys to open the door so I can regain my memory. But I need to find out which is the right key. My passion is like a hyena laughing at his friends because they lost a race to it. I suck at puzzles, especially ones about keys. I wonder. If I don’t find the real keys and I used up all my memory because of fake keys what will happen to me? Ahhh! My body. I’ve never felt this intense pain before. Will I die? But what about my memory. Will it fade away? No. I won’t allow it. I will still live! Yahhhhhh! Suddenly the sound of a TV shutting down shattered the room.
This video game is rubbish, these are all cut scenes. I knew I should of never bought this stupid game. Mum! Can I buy the brand new war elevator please? This new game was a cheap rip off of some other detective game. So can you? I will never stop nagging you for it. So will you? And can you please say yes or I will never love you anymore. ”Ok darling and it’s dinner time too.” replied the mother.
The End…
Or Is It?
Homer and Bart are playing tennis while Tom and Jerry are eating steak. Then Puss In Boots is drinking milk. Marge and Lisa is doing an BBQ with sausages. Snoopy is lying on Santa’s little helpers house. Bart beaten Homer on tennis so Homer is trying to strangle Bart for 20 seconds. After that day everyone is going to school except for Marge and Homer because they are going to go to a date. Bart escaped school with snoopy, Jerry, Tom and Puss in boots. Milhouse follow them so he can escape too. Then Marge got really sick of Homer Jay Simpson, instead of going home Marge went to the circus to go to the Dragon roller coaster plus it is the highest roller coaster of them all. Homer got really scared because it hasn’t been tested yet so he yelled at Marge and she nearly got killed for ever. In the meantime Bart and Snoopy are playing ping pong and puss In boots is watching tv with Lisa.
Then Marge and Homer went home to have tea so they can relax for the rest of the day. And then the reports came to all of the kids parents. Puss in Boots said “This is historical”. “I know” shouted Marge. Then Homer came home and saw Bart’s report he was so shocked at Bart’s report. He was so angry he even sent him to his bedroom for getting his report bad. That wasn’t all Bart call Milhouse to tell Bart’s report. He said “it’s time for mission code red it’s time to regroup the team call Nelson, Milhouse and the twins.” That’s all the people we need and tell Nelson to bring the black ninja suits to do code red”. While Marge and Homer are sleeping and all of the parent’s are sleeping too if ground’s keeper Willie is still awake we will have to beat him up if we want to keep up the mission I will wake up Snoopy for the bait if Skinner is still awake. If it doesn’t work the twins have to make that stink smoke gas again. And we will get are prize the new improved iPad 3000 and the new also improved apple-mac 10000 infinity and beyond computer. Remember the plan everyone over and out. Then Bart knock out Skinner so we can go inside the school to get are beautiful prize’s there are. Come on we need to get past the pointy laser’s and it’s not impossible because we are The mission impossible no one can beat us at any mission including this mission don’t forget guys there are a lots of traps every where plus there are trap panels also don’t leave foot prints or finger prints ok. no the sunshine is coming up don’t abort mission when you get your prize go to your locker hide in there so the kids won’t you sleeping in there or something else so don’t abort mission ok over and out.
Into the woods
It all started in the woods, I had lost my necklace venturing around .I was aimlessly wandering around having thoughts race through my mind like a million cars on one track-my brain. I took out an ancient looking rag out of my dress and wiped the beads of sweat dripping from my pinafore. Peering around cautiously of my surrounding, I continued walking; the trees were all oak giving me shade under the brightly lit sun in the sky. My limbs were wearing out after every step I took. I needed to be out of the woods soon before night fell. Fear was knocking at my door so I ran away but my legs were controlling over my brain. Oh no?
Every turn I took were longing I felt an urge to give up but I pushed through the pain. Without warning, one of the oak trees cracked before my eyes. Then I knew that I wasn’t safe in the woods. I turned back but a thought in my head said, “ Carry on.” Big mistake. I felt that I was walking in circles, the path was beginning to be unclear and a glimpse of hope was fading along with my faith in navigating a way out of this prison.
I sat down for a moment and I thought what would have happened if I went a different route but it always lead to the start where I went into the woods. Why I coming into the woods without a map? Great. I now know new why I failed in Geography. Columbus made it look so easy, just hand him a map and a boat and away he goes. I thought of what mum and dad would do at home, apart from arguing! The phrase there was no place like home was a speck of dust on the wrecked broken floor. As home was a war zone between my two parents as they decided that they needed a “break”. All I was thinking about was Mum frantically passing to and through wondering whereabouts I was. I would never be able to live with myself making Mum worry like that. I have given up hope of finding a way out, as this prison cell door will never open. All that confidence I had weltered away. Those turns I took were the only adventure I had in my whole lifetime as I always used to be the referee in the screaming matches at home.
I turned back to the route that lay in front of but something stopped my blood pumping. Wolf. It was a venomous wolf that was looking at me with his ears raised. I didn’t know whether to take my first move but my legs took advice from my brain and I ran away. Dodging bushes, cracked trees. I fell. I was paralyzed with fear. Gasping for air. He pounced on my body. Everlasting scars in my brain, on my body.
It all started in the woods…
The Alley Way
The night sky was shining down on the busy streets of London town Kendal`s heart started to pump it was getting faster and faster by the second a chill was growing and growing getting bigger by the minutes. Was it the end?
She slowly takes a breath and turns her head and faces the ally way Kendal take one step and starts to walk but she is stopping every few seconds to look around and see if there was a better way round but there wasn’t and she walked into the mist of the ally.
As Kendal was walking through the ally she felt that someone was watching her and voice was in her head saying turn back turn back but she kept on going, wishing she had some company or even a cat.
As her head was tilted down Kendal was walking at such a slow paste because one fast move anything could happen to her because there was some very scary stories in the newspaper that has haunted her until this day.
While she was walking in the distance there was a white figure lying on the floor hope was in the air she approached it thinking it could be a person even if they were drunk she wouldn’t mind but.
She reached it but it was an outline of a body Kendal thought her heart was about to jump out of her mouth. As she walked on there was a smaller outline . A memory just struck her mind, from when she was very young it was her DAD and BROTHER! They were walking down this street when she was very young they were shot by two men and it was the same date as it was today and time.
A tear of despair ran down her rose red cheeks as she wiped then away a cold sensation ran through her hand like something was holding it a voice said to her “It is your turn next!” two male voices that sounded like her dad said. Is her dad and her brother going to kill her?
Then a deep slop came up so she went down the chills got very bad memories flooded her mind she then started sob. Her eyes looked like a fountain over flowing.
The deeper she went the darker it got in the distance there was a very faint as she got closer it got brighter and brighter until she saw it was a flyer fly. It was very mesmerizing and Kendal lost her focus.
But in her pocket she had her cell phone and it had 1% and it ran out of battery and then she put her head against the wall and it started to rain a lot her face looked like it was put in mud all she wanted was it to end and it very close to the end. So slowly got up and walked one step and down she was never to be seen again.
Homer and Bart are playing tennis while Tom and Jerry are eating steak. Then Puss In Boots is drinking milk. Marge and Lisa is doing an BBQ with sausages. Snoopy is lying on Santa’s little helpers house. Bart beaten Homer on tennis so Homer is trying to strangle Bart for 20 seconds. After that day everyone is going to school except for Marge and Homer because they are going to go to a date. Bart escaped school with snoopy, Jerry, Tom and Puss in boots. Milhouse follow them so he can escape too. Then Marge got really sick of Homer Jay Simpson, instead of going home Marge went to the circus to go to the Dragon roller coaster plus it is the highest roller coaster of them all. Homer got really scared because it hasn’t been tested yet so he yelled at Marge and she nearly got killed for ever. In the meantime Bart and Snoopy are playing ping pong and puss In boots is watching tv with Lisa.
Then Marge and Homer went home to have tea so they can relax for the rest of the day. And then the reports came to all of the kids parents. Puss in Boots said “This is historical”. “I know” shouted Marge. Then Homer came home and saw Bart’s report he was so shocked at Bart’s report. He was so angry he even sent him to his bedroom for getting his report bad. That wasn’t all Bart call Milhouse to tell Bart’s report. He said “it’s time for mission code red it’s time to regroup the team call Nelson, Milhouse and the twins.” That’s all the people we need and tell Nelson to bring the black ninja suits to do code red”. While Marge and Homer are sleeping and all of the parent’s are sleeping too if ground’s keeper Willie is still awake we will have to beat him up if we want to keep up the mission I will wake up Snoopy for the bait if Skinner is still awake. If it doesn’t work the twins have to make that stink smoke gas again. And we will get are prize the new improved iPad 3000 and the new also improved apple-mac 10000 infinity and beyond computer. Remember the plan everyone over and out. Then Bart knock out Skinner so we can go inside the school to get are beautiful prize’s there are. Come on we need to get past the pointy laser’s and it’s not impossible because we are The mission impossible no one can beat us at any mission including this mission don’t forget guys there are a lots of traps every where plus there are trap panels also don’t leave foot prints or finger prints ok. no the sunshine is coming up don’t abort mission when you get your prize go to your locker hide in there so the kids won’t you sleeping in there or something else so don’t abort mission ok over and out.
THE RABBIT’S STORY
Written By Madeleine
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A few months ago, something happened to me that I did not like at all. Something that I would not like to happen again. It was probably the worst day of my life so far and I will remember it forever and ever…
It all started when I was playing in my cage as happily as a child flying down a rainbow. Without warning the massive bulldog (that I never liked from the beginning) jumped onto the table where my spotless metal cage was and cut my body so badly. I was in agony! As soon as the dog saw the red water flowing out of my body, he ran to my owner who was peacefully reading a book.
As soon as she saw the horrendous sight she nearly fainted bas I was her favourite pet. Then she grabbed me and covered the cuts with a wet flower-patterned flannel.
“Where are we going?” I tried to ask my owner, but all that came out was a squeaky cry. Then she put me in a cage, she wrapped me up nice and warm, and we both went in the yellow car that was as yellow as the sun. The dog did not come as he was going to stay in his kennel for being naughty (which was a good thing). She drove me to a huge brick building that was an animal prison but it said “ THE VET ” in big bold letters. I wondered what it was. But I did not have to go too far before I found out.
I was half right, it was scattered with ill looking animals. As soon as I got in the smell raced into my small, black nose. It was awful. It was too much for a small rabbit like me. “ Next please. ” The man was in a green out fit, which was grass. When we were in the room he asked my owner how I happened so she explained every thing although she got some bits wrong. After that, the green type man put a mask on top of my nose, which was really uncomfortable. Then there was a gush of air, which stank. I tried to get it off but I could not. This couldn’t be right!
Before long I was asleep, in a deep one. I had no idea what was happening but I knew it was embarrassing. How could they embarrass animals like this? I could not feel a thing, which was very worrying. Then I was awake with no cut anymore. But it looked like there was string. Had they been doing some sewing on an animal?
The good news was that I much better, I was so happy. The bulldog went to Battersea dogs home for a new owner. I was happy; nevertheless I got a bit lonely from time to time. Luckily, I have got lots of new things from my owners, which are really fun!
The Gold pack
It was a sunny morning my eyes glistened in amazement as I woke that morning, I gassed at the sun. Fuad and Tolulope went to the park. The me and Tolulope went home and we played Fifa 97 and we were on the ultimate team , and I got a new pack and I got Hazard the football player and I called my mum I she does know him so my dad came. Hazard Hazard and he said you are lying. And my mum screamed because my dad asked him to I just went silent because of that atrocity. Then I went to put my special fried rice and 6 salt and pepper chicken wing in the fridge and I went to carrying on (and 5 hour later) I asked Tolulope to bring it and it and it was gone. I went to see for myself and I saw Jordan coming down the stair eating it and he said pay back remember my birthday you ate my chocolate. I was so angry I fainted and came back to life in 5 seconds, I was so angry I could bite cement and my teeth will just break.
PRANK CALLING MY MUM
OK today im going to prank call my mum OK here I go.
(In a different voice I said) ‘’hello I have a TV for you.
OK how much is the TV. ’Fuad said
‘$500,000’Fuad’s mum said
‘$500,000! Are you mad! Anyway I did not even order any TV ‘the mum answered
‘’Yes you did you order Samsung TV’’he said
‘I’m not paying’ she said
‘’But we have already taken the money out of your account. ’He replied
‘Can I talk to your manger?’ she replied
‘’But I am the manger.’’ he relied
‘‘Hey mum it was a prank call’’ he said
‘Yes I knew that ‘she said
‘’No you did not’’ he said
’Yes I did’ she answered
‘‘Is that why you were panicking’ ’he replied
‘Bye Fuad ’she said
Fuad: I can’t go to school today.
Father: Why not? Fuad: I don’t feel well
Father: Where don’t you feel well?
Fuad: In school!
Fuad: My teacher says I have to write more clearly.
Father: That’s a good idea, Jordan. Fuad: No, it’s not. Then she’ll know I can’t spell.
Fuad: My math teacher is crazy
Father: Why?
Fuad: Yesterday she told us that five is 4+1; today she is telling us that five is 3 + 2. Dad: How do you like fourth grade? Fuad: It isn’t much fun.
Dad: That’s too bad. It was the best three years of my life!
Fuad: Hey, Dad, I got a hundred in school today!
Father: That’s great. What in? Fuad: A 40 in Reading and a 60 in Spelling.
Father : Let me see your report card. Fuad : I don’t have it.
Father : Why not? Fuad : My friend just borrowed it. He wants to scare his parents.
The Strawberry
I never really wanted to be a red strawberry , I’ve always wanted to be a juicy mango. The reason is because the mangos get packed up with the oranges .’I love oranges.’
One day, I got pulled and twisted until I gave up staying. I got carried on a trolley. Then I got taken to this freezing, cold , humorous thing. I was told by another strawberry that we are going to have surgery and I squeaked with fear. We got taken out of the big thing the top of the building next to me read FRUIT FACTORY.
This did not actually look like the other strawberry described it. It looked like it was a fruit holiday.
We got taken on a horizontal elevator I (think). I looked up and down and abra ca dab bra I was in a little plastic thingy wingy .It was really compact and shiny with miniature holes at the top. I was passed to another helper who exclaimed ‘ thankyou ’. The man skipped me over to a Van covered in me.
I was popped on top of another packet of strawberries. And next to me was a smart orange. The journey took ages (well it felt ages). There was someone in my packet who kept on singing and bouncing up and down. I ate one of my seeds because I was hungry. We all got taken out and another person came out to carry us all.
I got taken to a gigantic building named Sainburys in large , bold , orange letters. Everyone started chatting like it was a normal thing. We got put on trollies and we got taken into Sainburys . I got put on these gleaming white shelves. On the other isle there was another glossy silvery shelf. And guess what was there ……AN ORANGE!! That night I just did not stop thinking about oranges.
The next morning I had a lie in because I did not really sleep well and I think I ate too much and drank too much. I filed my seeds and went to the gym so I could impress the orange on the other isle before waiting to be seen. I had never been that bored that day in my life.
That afternoon a small pretty girl came to the shop , her name was Zoe. She came in asking her mum for some strawberries and then I thought uh oh when I heard strawberries. Her mum shouted no you have some at home and you haven’t finished them.
A few minutes later both of them came back to my isle. ‘ They must of agreed that Zoe could have some strawberries.’ She ran up to my packet and picked it up really visiously . She jumped up and down and yelled this one mummy. I got taken to the counter and I got bought. My packet got opened , suddenly I got picked up and down , down ,down I went.
The Town-Destiny-aged 10
She ambled down the street watching the wind blow. The dark streets could even scare a witch, the windows were cracked as if a rifle gunshot had hit them, the souls of the innocent were screaming as you walked by the graveyard. The streets were as dark as the night, the house was a desert in itself glory. Her Dad had told her to never give up on a case but right now he was not there to help her. She had to do it on her own. The teen smelled the scent of dust and fear through the wrecked downtown. Her blue sapphire eyes shone on her face when a tear flowed down her face, she looked down to see a clue – it was a footprint!
When she heard an ear-piercing scream she knew that it was not the hauteur scream (such a man would not scream so high!) It must a human may be a little girl. She ran towards the footprints and but there was no hunter, just a mouse. All of a sudden, it struck to her ‘The hunter was the only one there!’ It could be another clue!
As she said that there was an evil laugh coming from the alley she turned around to see no one but a Man wandering around like there was any escape. She could not tell who or what it was because of the darkness “Slow down, you can get hurt by doing-“
It was the HAUTEUR! He had jet black hair with a fringe on the side she chased him through the Twists and turns, corners and edges it was like the great British run like over again her heart was race sweat ran down her as he grabbed his dagger and walked over to the helpless teenage girl. She let out an unholy scream .The scream could have woken the dead from there grave.
“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH”……The scream gave to Hauteur a fright and dropped the dagger on and grave they said ’Mrs Grace Holmes’. All of a sudden a man came attacked he was in the same clothes as the hauteur and scared the hauteur away.
“Darling it’s me! “ Shouted Sherlock Holmes. “Dad! You’re the hauteur?” She hugs him like he was a great frizzly bear. All at once, the girl realised that her dad had set her a case! That was AWSOME!
And both of them went back home but it came to Zoey (the teen girl a.k.a. Sherlock Holmes daughter) But then it came to her about the blood what was that about? As they walked she felt her arm burning (literally).It was coming from the iron hard hand of her father’s now she had realised that her ‘Dad’ had brown hair but now he had
So no one knows if it is a happily ever after, so let’s say this is not the end but just the beginning….
The boat in the sky!
There was a boy called Fred, he’d always wanted to go up into the Sapphire sky. Every day he would twist and turn on his way to school imaging what would be up in the bright blue sky. He had asked everyone but everything they said he thought way a lie, they told him that there was a legend about a wooden ship in the sky and that on it was… They always stopped there but why?
One day at school he found a book on the floor, he look inside it and saw another small book. Fred opened it. The heading was “the secrets of the village. It said that if you say Cateebah”… it was blank-Fred wondered why it had stopped there. He put the small book in the huge book, and took it home! He asked his mum and dad and they said if you say his name the wooden ship will come, and on it will be-you know who! He has a giant fish tank on his head and it is believed that he is the best swordsman.
That night he was thinking about Cateebah, the legend was that if he says his name he will come and hunt you down on his ship and he will be able to go in the sky. He couldn’t see any floors in his plan. So that morning he left the house, he started to twist and turn while saying” Cateebah Cateebah”. Then when he got to school nothing happened; Fred ways very disappointed and then he started saying to himself why did I believe the book. On his way home he kept on saying “Cateebah” and then he saw a golden ladder fall before him. Then Fred looked up and the ladder went into the blue sky. He started and then he went up the lad der 5 minutes in Fred was saying “this ladder is like going up the m4 and I am getting very tired”! 8 and half minutes he got up the ladder and seemed to be in a wooden boat and high in the sky…
Then Fred knew where he was, he was on Cateebah’s ship- then he hid behind two barrels. A few seconds later he saw Cateebah and then he felt something sharp hit his foot, and it was Cateebah sword. He thought for an moment and then had an epiphany the rest the book said he had the sharpest sword in the world to. Fred picked up the sword and cared at Cateebah and hit him on the head; then the fish tank broke and he ran away so did the ship. Fred went back to tell everyone about it and that you can say Cateebah without fear. Everyone was so pleased and his mum and dad and everyone in the village were so pleased, Fred got a present from everyone. So be careful in what you believe in.
The Dark World: Our Adventure begins
It was 11pm, very gloomy and mysterious where animals and insects lurk in the night-light. Reuben, a big, huge 13 year old was doing a deed for his mother. Reuben was like all those young teenagers, he had a phone, did not pay attention to anybody before he had to do this endeavored on this work. He was climbing up a hard, steep hill, after he sauntered along an everlasting road. He was collecting milk for a cow so he could drink and produce milk. As he was nearing the top of the hill he stopped, as he could not clearly see. When he finally regained eyesight he was about to turn a corner but then saw something that almost made him scream. Ghosts!
Before he let out a horrific shriek, he quickly closed his mouth. He didn’t care whatever his mum said he should do there was no way he was going past his only fear. But when he was going to turn back and go home, the two ghosts started a conversation.
“We can’t just leave, we haven’t even started scaring people yet. However what should I wear clown shoes or nose?” said Ghost 1.
“I’ve got an idea how about none of the above.” Ghost 2 replied.
As Reuben was listening very carefully he was about to drop. But lucking he held on to a huge rock and was steadily standing. When the ghosts finished their discussion, Reuben thought it was going to be a good time to run home. But he tripped on a rock and fell to the floor and made a huge thud. The ghosts turned around and saw a shocked Reuben on the floor. He REALLY wished he had brought his running shoes, because this could take a while.
Reuben started a high speed run as the ghosts followed in quick pursuit. As Reuben ran round bushes the ghosts could go THROUGH them. And when the ghosts caught up with the teenager he knew it would be a matter of time before he was caught. After 10 long minutes, Reuben was finally caught and brought to a corner. He was pushed to the firm, rocky floor. A scared Reuben was looking at them, wondering what to do. It went 23 whole minutes without a word. So Reuben finally asked a life-changing question. “What are you going to do to me?” So after a long, heated discussion with his fellow partner, they finally came up with an agreement. “If you go home, we will never haunt you again, OK.” The 2 ghosts replied in a short amount of time. So on the walk home, Reuben knew he had to be really careful. However, on the way, he tripped over a rock and fell. He tried to use his hands, but it was no use.
This turned out to be a documentary.
“Aww its ended.” Reuben said.
After that, he saw 2 ghosts face to face…
TO BE CONTINUED…
ALBERT SQUARE!
AS THE GATES SWANG SIDE TO SIDE THE GHOST OF LOLA WAS HANGING OF A building .EVERYONE ran TO THE GATES, SECONDS later, a FOREIGN person arrived INTO the SQUARE, BUT HE WAS NOT WELCOMED AS GREAT AS HE THOUGHT HE WOULD BE, “GET OUT OF HERE” BELLOWED THE CROWD SO he, MR COOPER HURTLED AWAY LOOKING BACK AT THE DISGUSTING BEHAVED PEOPLE. BUT AS HE WAS RUNNING HE TRIPPED UP ON A KEY,ANCIENT KEY WITH 12 NUMBERS ON, SO MR COOPER PIKED IT UP AND WHEN HE SHUT HIS DOOR HE QUIKLY OPENED IT BACK OPEN HIS EYES FLASHED BEFORE HE WOULD EVER! HE NOW THEN UNDERSTOOD WHAT WAS GOING ON ,SO HE THOUGHT ABOUT IT AND THOUGHT IF THE KEY HAD SOMETHING TO DO WITH IT ,SO HE DECIDED TO RING IT ON HIS CELLPHONE.HE SPOKE THEY HAD QUITE A LONG CHAT BUT AS HE PUT THE PHONE DOWN HE KNEW IT WAS THE KILLER “WAIT SHE SHOUTED THE KILLER OF LOLA ALREADY had HANG UP ON THE PHONE HE THEN RANG IT AGAIN HE AWNSERED “I KNOW YOU KILLED LOLA ,LETS MEET UP AT THE WOODSHIP AREA”.10 MINS AFTER COOPER WAS WAITING THERE THE KILLER WAS ERIC THEY SPOKE ABOUT WHY HE KILLED HER. AS THEY LEFT COOPER SAID I AM TELLING you I can’t keep the secret. Eric ran after him, but he couldn’t catch up. then cooper told his mum Shirley but as always ,she never believed him ,so he said ok but its true so he told everyone in albert square they never believed him so Eric got mad and killed copper as well, “that might teach you a lesson” he exclaimed. when he got inside his house his hands were covered in blood, so he washed them and ripped up all the evidence but he did not know his two children were watching him so when he left to go to the shops they put together the evidence doing teamwork and saw a number. they rang it and they knew it was there dad they didn’t want to tell the police because they were to scared so they looked for company there best friend Stacie, so they went to the police and told them, the police wanted evidence so they gave the police evidence and off they went searching for Eric but he was caught first time and that is how they found him. when he reached to the station he told the story it goes here we go he exclaimed with a miserable voice. I was at the station and saw £200 so I stole it and ran away and slipped into the railway and a train came coming and knocked her over but I…, too late 27 years your under plus the crimes you have done in the past ,Eric gasped he never knew they would find out about that awful crime, the children cried and Eric went to jail.
The end
The Ghostly Galleon
By Ned Benbow Mead
Do you like adventures? Have you ever believed in Pirates? Well…
It was a perishing night on Wood hill Road. The wind was a torrent of darkness among the gusty trees, and on this misty road was peculiar house, inside this house was a little boy named Ned, being sent to his room by his sometimes entertaining Mum Jill. Ned was an adventurous, cunning boy who frequently got into trouble. As Ned turned the old rusty handle to his creaky, mysterious bedroom door he was on a Ghostly Pirate ship. Ned gazed around drowsily and met some Pirates. “Arrh me hearties!” squabbled the Pirates.
“Err…hello!” spoke Ned in amazement.
The Pirates liked Ned so they asked if they could sail with him and of course Ned replied “Yes…”
As the hours pasted by Ned led the Pirates to an island called The Mythical Island. On the island were bones and dead bodies of pirates who were unsuccessful of finding the treasure. That day got foggy so they got lost, the shipmates were complaining because they were hungry and all they had to eat was stale bread. “Are we there yet?” moaned Jeff. Jeff was the youngest of them all and was adopted by the pirates who found him on a boat in the middle of nowhere. The Pirates blamed Ned and made him walk the menacing plank. “JUMP, JUMP, JUMP!” cheered the Pirates. Ned’s heart pounded against his breast his outcome was not going to be pretty. “5…4…3…2…1 JUMP!” yelled the Pirates. Ned took a deep breath and threw himself of the plank, leading to a gigantically big splash.
Ned swam up and saw sharks darting towards him and all eyes were on him. Because Ned was a petite boy he looked pleasing to the eye of the sharks. He caught a glimpse of a tall, skinny ladder, leading to the creepy pirate ship. He swam as fast as he could, grabbed the ladder and fiercely began to climb with pace. Up, up he went with beads of sweat dripping down from his head he had forgot his handkerchief at home. Oh home he missed it greatly. Suddenly Ned slipped “Arhhhhh!” he exploded into the sea, never to be seen again…
“MUM! Sharks are eating me, HELP!” imagined Ned. Sitting up on his luxurious bed. “I knew you shouldn’t have eaten that cheese last night, it gives you nightmares!” admitted Jill rushing into the room in her slilk like dressing gown to give to give Ned a huge hug, “Everything will be okay, don’t worry.”
“Ok…” sighed Ned laying down to go to sleep.
“Night night don’t let the bed bugs bite.” yawned Jill she was now tired after a long day of work at the Guardian Newspaper.
I wonder what dreames will awate Ned next time…?
Maybe the piartes will seek their return. Who knows what will happen it is up to them…?
THE OLD WAR
The cheers still ring in my ears. I was leaving my good old country America! You see I was a soldier in the 2nd world war. I was fighting in D-Day, 1944. Before I knew it I was in a U-boat vomiting a lot ! I was scared like a dead man walking. I still believed in myself. We were going to Win This War! We arrived in Normandy I sprinted like a mad man not noticing the blood on my boot
. The first German to oppose me was already dead. Before I knew it I had ran out of ammo. I carried on fighting with a bayonet. Finally I found a bag of bullets for my rifle. I finally was backed up by one tank; a funny .I felt royal having a tank following ME! I arrived at the Atlantic wall (the wall that the Germans built to stop the English, the Americans…) from arriving in France. I ran but ping clack I was down some soldier had shot my leg but it only hit the side I could carry on fighting even though the blood trickled down my leg. The pain moved up my thigh.
Soon I was crawling on the sandy shore crying with pain, pleading God for his mercy. Soon an American medic came, he saved my life. We finally arrived to a squad who told us that we had won, but we still had to move into France. After a while I got better I managed to shoot again. I was ready for war. I finally arrived at the battle field were we won. I was delighted. Every couple of weeks I wrote to my family. My little girl Gwen, my wife Josette. I definitely missed them. We received a letter telling us to find a soldier called Duncan; the ink was smudged so we did not know why we needed to find him. Soon I became mates with a soldier called Morrell. One day my squad was walking on a field when a tank arrived, one problem it was German!! It aimed, just then it shot. God was on our side, it went over our head and exploded a tank behind us, something was strange, the tank behind us was a German Tank. The lid opened to reveal an American soldier. What luck!
We were run as a German jeep followed. Out of nowhere a bombed town stood before us, in all its well not-glory. We ventured into the town attentively an American came towards us” My name is Duncan. At last we found Duncan. Duncan explained how he had listened to a radio transmission and how Germans were going to kill him so he needed help we set sticky bombs and we position to shoot them.
The dreaded day arrived, the 12th of August 1944. I had first kill, Morrell shot well too, but that day he died a tank shot his tower, he could never had survived.
SILLY MOUSE
There was a mouse,
Upon a house,
Who loved the river,
But didn’t like liver,
But then a lady, Sat on his gravy
Then and there the mouse flew into the old majestic house, and then his life changed forever until he saw a door it was no ordinary door but it was a magic door and it said if anyone passes through this magic door your soul will be left on the floor and then and only then so the mouse did so as he pushed open the door and his heart racing like Usain Bolt he went in and guess what it was? It was a cinema bet you £10 you wouldn’t guess! (Back to the story) it was a cinema but no ordinary cinema it was a cinema of how he would die.
MOTTO
DON’T BE NOSY AND NEVER LEAVE YOUR SOUL BEHIND
The Door
It was like opening the door of suspense. The handle felt as if it was sweltering and panicking just about to face evil. The unusual mirrored crystal door handle reflected on Bunty’s hand. Her heart was pounding and she could hear the deep thumping in her body. As her palms were wilting, she took one step closer. “Oh no!” she yelled in meek voice, she had slipped, falling onto the ground making a loud punch noise. Bunty’s heart was beating as fast as ever and she could now feel a degree of anxiousness all around. Feeling nervous and quite curios Bunty looked over her shoulder at the floral netted curtains and across, out of the window to see a fresh battle field with certain objects lying about.
Bunty was now beyond curios to see the room behind the door, ‘ Or was it even a room?! It could be a, a maze leading to space!!’ . To Bunty it was like a new world planted in her wondrous brain.
‘Deep breaths’ she thought as she edged closer to the door still too frightened to wake up the nurse or Suzanna and Charlotte. Bunty placed her hand on the handle and slowly twisted it. “Uh!” A loud screech came from the handle as she twisted it curiously but nervously. Unexpectedly Bunty stepped back examining the door. At the top of the door there a light outline of a name that Bunty couldn’t quite work out.
“S, well, I think. Or maybe a 5? No, an S. O, and that looks like a P it must Sophie I’m sure.”
Gritting her teeth, Bunty crept sneakily over to Charlotte’s bedroom and pepped through the door. “Zzzzzz”
“Zzzzzzzz” Bunty crept back to the door trying her best to not be seen. Like a cat , Bunty sneaked through the house in every possible way. Quick and slick, she tried again. Twist – twist – twist…
It wouldn’t open. ”It must need a key.”
Bunty peered over to the window sill and stared. For the first time in 10 seconds she looked down to see a vase that she hadn’t seen the previous time she had looked there. The vase was empty. Bunty walked over to the vase in hope of a key. Reaching into the vase, Bunty suddenly felt a cold liquid touching her hand. ‘Oh, It must be water’ she thought. As she dipped her hand in the water she reached a collection of keys. ’yes’ thought to her self. ‘ but which one is it? I’ll have to try every one.’ Randomly Bunty picked out one of the keys and tried to open the door. Her hand was shaking as she turned the key. ‘ Oh I wish it would work’. Next she picked up another key, staring at the label attached to it. ‘ Why would it say it say Sophie on it? That must mean this door’. Quickly Bunty pushed it in and the door flung open. ‘YES!But there was nothing there!’ Never mind.
These are fantastic stories. I’ve read all of them and they sound interesting. I hope they will get chosen as 1 of the best stories EVER!
I love all of the stories they are amazing!
PS; The real version of my story is the second one 🙂