Wonderful Writing!

This half term in Year 5, we have been learning about WW2. As part of this, in our English lessons, we decided to write our own stories that were set during this period.

All of the children worked really hard on their writing. Please enjoy reading their stories, and marvelling at their imaginations. I am so proud of what they have written – well done Year 5!

Sylvie Aldous Anish Chisom Clementine Daniela Deanna Dinah Divine Ella Emil Glenda Holly Jimmy Lauren Leon Lucas Luke Margot Marissa Mrinali Naima Oscar Polly Sam Samuel Lee Sophie Timi

Please comment below to let us know which stories you have read, and have enjoyed reading!

 

14 thoughts on “Wonderful Writing!

  • 04/05/2017 at 5:10 pm
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    I loved reading Emil’s story. I thought that the plot was very intriguing. The description of the food made my mouth water it was so good! I thought that the ending was very interesting because we never discover if Jan survives or gets caught. This technique had a very good effect.

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  • 04/05/2017 at 5:51 pm
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    I enjoyed learning about World War Two and writing our own stories. My favourite part of learning World War Two was making the spitfires during art. One thing that I learnt was that Adolf Hitler thought children with blonde hair and blue eyes was a perfect role model. Another thing I learnt was that Adolf Hitler killed himself.

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  • 04/05/2017 at 6:07 pm
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     When my sister read the story I wrote, she exclaimed that she felt as if she was reading a book from a world-known author!

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  • 04/05/2017 at 6:09 pm
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    I had so much fun writing my stories and I think it was one of my best story so far.

    I think everyones turned out great.

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  • 05/05/2017 at 4:24 pm
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    Well done everybody all of the stories are so amazing and I am really proud of mine, I shared it with all my family and read some other ones to them as well. All of the description my mum thought was amazing and my dad said it was really good quality,and he is a writer so that is saying something. I really enjoyed writing my story it was definitely worth the time.
    thanks for the support Miss Henderson!

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  • 05/05/2017 at 4:37 pm
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    I loved writing these stories it was so exciting and I loved writing them based on a different time period. Thank you!

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  • 05/05/2017 at 8:25 pm
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    i liked all the grammar in our stories i think we did really well i wish these were published but all our different stories in one book and name it DIFFERENT WW2 STORIES.

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  • 06/05/2017 at 2:43 pm
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    The stories are fantastic and were great fun writing. Thank you Miss Henderson and Janet for helping us produce these pretty much expert stories full of adjectives and interesting plots. Hope we do more work like this in the future. 

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  • 06/05/2017 at 2:44 pm
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    Great stories Year 5. They are all very engaging and full of ambitious adjectives! Keep up the good work!!! : ) 

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  • 07/05/2017 at 9:34 am
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    The stories are so good, I think everyone worked so hard and it has payed off

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  • 07/05/2017 at 5:36 pm
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    All of these great stories were intruiging ,some even with twists! 
    I enjoyed reading these stories it was very sad hearing about all these events that are set in the 2nd world war and some of the things that happened in the stories will of actually happened. 
    -I really enjoyed writing my story and I learnt many things about the war whilst writing it.
    I loved seeing and reading these brilliant , descriptive  stories and the front covers were beautiful and all of the stories were set in the same time but greatly unique. I think every story was fabulous!!!

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  • 08/05/2017 at 6:27 am
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    I really
    liked making our world war II stories. I liked reading everyone else’s.

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  • 08/05/2017 at 5:02 pm
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    i love my story and thank you for putting them on the blog

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  • 08/05/2017 at 5:23 pm
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    I loved making the WW2 stories. Everyone’s story was amazing and everyone worked really hard on it!????⭐️

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