Atmospheric writing

Stars of the Week: Magnus & Harriet

This week we have been learning about how to include atmosphere into our writing to engage the reader. We discussed about using ambitious language and well-chosen vocabulary to help build atmosphere and bring our writing to life.

Here are some extracts from our work:

The room was cold and unwelcoming. Tom finally turned around to glare at his intruder – Victory

The rained lashed across the window and the rumble of thunder shook the air around them – Freddie

He sat there, transfixed and wide-eyed as the wardrobe burst into flames – Blubelle

 

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