This week in Year 5, we have been editing and improving stories which we wrote based upon Oliver Twist.
All of the children put a tremendous amount of effort into writing their stories and I hope they feel extremely proud of themselves for the end result – well done Year 5!
Year 5 stars of the week: Thomas and Heidi
Great work and great description, to Frieddie
“Great work, just like the real thing, but from the mind of a 9 year old girl” From Zakaria-To Glennis
I really enjoyed reading Tito’s story, and I thought it had lots of good character description.
I really enjoyed writing the stories as we could choose what happened and make them our own. It was really fun when Miss Henderson let us create our own front cover as well. Everyone had come up with amazing ideas, and when I read the stories, I was so impressed about how much our writing has improved, just from this year.
It was really fun writing the brilliant stories and I wish I could do it again. I really liked Zakaria’s over 1000 word story! I liked your descriptions! I also liked everyone’s story. WELL DONE!
It was very fun when I did the front cover and I really liked Imrans story it was funny .